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This is another poem I wrote recently.

Posted on Apr 28th, 2008 by Bahamut : dragon king Bahamut

The Searcher

I am walking down a dark road
looking for you.
Are you in one of the houses,
or are you driving past me?
Am I going the right way
or moving farther from
your embrace I so long for?

I know I will find you,
but how much longer must I walk?
My legs are growing tired
and the night is closing in.
I need you.
Where are you?

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Ami : Funny Bunny
14 days later
Ami said

Thats very good.  What inspired you to write that poem?

Bahamut : dragon king
15 days later
Bahamut said

To tell the truth, I was reading the Wolfblade Trilogy, which is really kind of like a soap opera in a book. Yeah, I wouldn't expect me to read a soap opera either, but it is really good. Anyway, one of the characters, Starros, is torn away from the woman he loves, Leila. I was trying to put myself into his shoes and imagine what it would be like to have something like that happen.

Ami : Funny Bunny
16 days later
Ami said

Its good you read stuff like that.  There arn't many who would have a wide taste in books, so to speak.  Anyways, you did a very good job.  I personally think poems are very hard to write, but I do enjoy reading them.

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